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Please criticize. tell me what you really think. any problems you see tell me. hope you enjoy.The doors of the oval office flew open. Ten men in military attire walked in with haste. “ Mr. president “ the first one through the door said carrying a laptop. “ we have a problem”. “Doesn’t any one knock any more “ the president said looking up from his desk. “An unidentified aircraft has appeared over Southern Ireland“ the man continued. “ok” the president said wondering what this had to do with him. “ keep me posted as the situation progresses” . “ Umm President Fisk I don’t think you understand the true magnitude of the situation” the general said standing in front of the resolute desk. “ the unidentified aircraft is ten times the size of a B52 Bomber and it just appeared on our radar a hour ago.” The presidents facial expression changed from a look of indifference to look of utter disbelief. “ Well what do we know general?” the president said. The general sat his laptop on the resolute desk.“ No country has claimed the aircraft it does not appear to be armed” the general said typing a password into the laptop. “ it appeared on our radar as it entered our atmosphere. Our sci…….”. “ Wait” the president said looking at the general. “ Are you trying to tell me this thing came from space?” the general looked at the other men in the room as if looking for direction. “ It appears so Mr. president.” The president sat motionless behind the resolute desk. Within the last five minutes General Waldo and his comrades had given him information that had made his three years of experience as president seem like ill preparation.The president covered his face with his hands. “Why didn’t we detect this thing earlier?” he asked frustrated. “ We don’t know” said a man in a air force uniform. “ Wedidn’t know this thing existed until an hour ago. We believe the craft has advanced stealthtechnology the likes of which we have never scene.” “ Do we have any idea who designed this thing?” the president said looking at another man. “ Maybe China or Russia” he said turning his head to the director of the CIA. ”Not possible, Russia’s space program all but collapsed after the cold war. They don’t have the capability to dream of things like this. China, no way. China building something like this is like giving your two year old a tooth pick and he conquers the world with it”. “ You still haven’t answered my question “ the president said getting increasingly agitated. “ Who does this thing belong to?” he said looking around the room. The room went quiet. The men held their heads down looking from one to another waiting for someone to answer the question each of them dreaded. General Waldo stepped forward and cleared his throat. ” Umm President Fisk we don’t believe that this craft came from a country on earth. Our theory is it came from space.”President Fisk sat dumbfounded behind the resolute desk. “ Space” he said to himself. Never in thirty eight years of existences had he heard or attempted to mentally conceive something so absurd. Had any other man who had sat in his position heard such words. George Washington didn’t have to deal with space ships. Did he? Wait he thought to himself. This is obviously some kind of joke. “I’m getting Punked, it all makes since now. In a few seconds a hidden camera crew will surprise me and I will laugh the rest of the day away with General Waldo and every one else who was in on it. In the morning there will be a huge headline in USA Today that says “ President Fisk Punked” and all will be well again. But no such thing happened. The grim faced military men stood aroundhim waiting for directions.“What is the location of the aircraft?” he asked the general. The general studiedthe laptop. “ It is moving southeast at approximately 250mph over the Atlantic ocean. It is expected to enter the Gulf of Mexico in three hours. “ Is there a way to deploy aircraft to the UFO before it reaches the coast.” “ Yes sir Mr. President” the secretary of the navy said stepping forward. “ The USS Enterprise is returning home from the middle east . She’s loaded with eighty FA-18`S ready for orders. “Well what are you waiting for?” said President Fisk now standing up. “ Get all of those planes in the air intercepting that what ever the hell it is. Do not use force if unless necessary. Where the hell is the director of the CIA, O there he is, get me a line to Russia and the United Kingdom.” “Yes sir” the men said in unison. Movement began in the room as the secretary of the navy and the director of the CIA went to carry out their orders.“Has this got into the news yet?” the president asked the general. “ No major news providers have gotten hold of the story yet.” the general said now sitting in a chair in the oval office. “I guest that’s a plus side.” the President said. “The press will find out eventually send out a press release telling them as little as possible. Make it seem minor send it to NBC they don’t ask many questions”.“Mr. President” the secretary of navy said. “ the planes are in the air and are in route. They should intercept it in five minutes”. “Good keep me posted” said the president. “ Where is my line to Russia are we the only country doing any thing about this. Where the hell is France?” “Mr. President” the director of the CIA said. “ TheRussian prime minister is busy at the moment but they are sending support to investigate the UFO.” “Fantastic” said the president . “Now we need to talk to Mexico are they prepared for this thing whatever it is coming to the gulf of Mexico.” The door flew openagain, in walked a Navy officer.” Mr. President the planes have a visual of the unidentified aircraft. We will send you a picture as soon as we receive them.” “ Excellent” said president Fisk. The officer walked out and closed the door. “ I want all air traffic suspended” the president said. “ I want the country on……” suddenly the door swung open as he attempted to give out orders. The officer that was In the room moments ago was back again. His expression had changed from one of confidence to one of a lack of understanding. “Do you have the visuals?” the president asked the officer standing in the door way. “ No sir” said the officer. “ Well what’s the problem?” asked the president. “ It’s the planes sir” said the officer nervously. “ What they’ve been shoot down already?” said the president shocked. “No” said the officer who was the center of attention in the room now. “ The pilots were unable to control the planes its like they have a mind of their on and now we’ve lost contact with them.” said the officer hardly believing his own words. “ What?” said the president.Suddenly the lights in the white house flickered. Every computer and TV screen went black. “What the hells happening?” yelled the president. The door swung open again. Another officer ran in. “ We’ve lost control of all the computers.” Suddenly the screen on the laptop that sat In front of the president changed. on the screen sat a figure in shrouded in the shadows. All the men in the room crowded around the laptop on the resolute desk.All you could see of the figure was its outline. “Inhabitants of earth” the figure spoke with the voice of a highly educated man. “ It is of me and my peoples greatest apology that we should intrude on your planets daily routines in such a rude manner. But we felt the message in which we are sending you is worthy of the inconvenience. I am sure you are allwondering who we are and why we have taken over your mass communication networks? Well first of we are Ekos. From the planet Noiz and we are hear to save you. You see my people are at least twenty five years more technologically advanced than the people of earth. So therefore we have had more experience with space exploration. We have been to galaxies your scientist have yet to discover. We have also studied earth and its inhabitants. We have studied the cultures your languages history and technology. That is why I am able to communicate with you today. The purpose of this unexpected visit is to tell you about a rather grime discovery. A few months ago we discovered a giant rock roughly the size of mars traveling at mach 5. We observed the object and calculated its path and we have concluded that in five years the rock will collide with earth. Upon discovering this information we worked feverishly to destroy the object but to no avail. But we thought of the next best thing. That is the purpose of our visit. The evacuation of earth. We understand that this may be hard to fathom but we have evidence that we are more than willing to present to your leaders. A ambassador from our planet will be sent to each of your countries leaders to present our evidence and our plan. Our plan being to transport the inhabitants of this planet to Noiz until other accommodations are made available. Ten spacecraft are in route to earth at this moment to began the transport evacuation. The spacecraft will accommodate only three hundred thousand people at a time. But manymore trips will be made. In order to board the spacecraft you must go through a scan. The scan will determine if you have any disease that could infect other humans or Ekos. If you have any such ailment you cannot enter the craft. The evacuation is strictly voluntary. If you wish to stay on earth we will not stop you. Though it is in your best interest to comewith us if you value your life. While we are happy to do this for the people of earth we require a small payment. Your planet has a mineral that would be useful to us. Jade as you call it is useful in the medical advancements of our people we recently discovered. We will require at least ten tons of it. We believe it a small price for saving the whole human race. In five minutes our ambassadors will met with your countries leaders. We hope no violence will come from this since we are doing this in your interest. I bid you farewell.”The screen went blank again. The men still watching it expecting it to do something else. The lights flickered and the computer went back to normal. The room was still quiet. The president stood there staring at the men who stared back at him. “so everyone in the united states saw that?” the president asked not directing the question to any one in particular. “ Yes” said the general. The door swung open again. “There is a unidentified aircraft approaching from the east.” said the officer. “ The ambassador” the president said. “Don’t fire on it” the general said. “ Don’t piss these guys of until we figure out what the hell their talking about.” “Get ready for the ambassador” the president said. “I want the director from NASA I want every astronomer scientist and every other guy with PHD that I should be talking to here ASAP.” The room filled with movement.The door swung open . “Mr. president” a grey haired man wearing a suit said. “ Riots are breaking out all over the country.” the door swung open again. “ Sir look out the window the ambassador is approaching.” President Fisk ran to the window. There he watched a aircraft no bigger than a Oldsmobile approach the white house front lawn. A phone rang. The general picked it up. “Ok” he said and hung up. “that was Canada their ambassador has arrived. The aircraft slowed down for a vertical landing. The aircraft was a grayishcolor. It had no wings or a jet engine. It looked like a giant mushroom. The windows were pitch black. The aircraft began to land. The wind from the aircrafts engine blew the trees and bushes nearby. The wind sent a brick flying towards the window of the oval office. The president ducked just before the brick crashed through the window. He stood back up as the aircraft had turned of its engines. As soon as they were off secret service agents surrounded it without guns drawn. The president watched as the doors of the aircraft slid open. A figure began to appear.
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