Hey dolls and guys: I decided to try my hand at erotic poetry with kind of sci-fi flavor and I wanted critques and comments from a group of writers I really respect. Be kind ya'll (smile) I ain't leaving it up for long lol, trust.Blue Light(for Q)Let your tonguefingers open mygardenwhat you find thereis yourstaste my blackberriesnibble my datetheir sweetnessis unparalleledjuicy enoughto satisfy your cravingand quench your thirstI surrender…my mouthhandsopen your gardenwhat I find thereis mineripe plumsto savorpapaya aplentyto feed my hungerlarge enough to mountas we ride intoEros's realmrocked by wavescradled in cries, whisperslong and deepthrough moist cavernsdark snug tunnelswet sugared valleysbetween caramel vinesJourney with me‘neath the blue lightof my dreamsamid sunset/sunriseWhat we'll find thereis oursCopyright 2008 Valjeanne Jeffers-Thompson all rights reservedThanks one and all for your support!!!
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