So here are the first 1600 words of my short story "Shattering the Spear." I've posted it as a PDF doc to make it easier to read. Need to know if as a short story there's enough character development so far; if it flows; if it seems realistic; if as a reader you'd be concerned with what happens next. Feel free to set your hammers on kill if need be....
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