I would like to start by saying thanks to all on our Women in Black Science Fiction group.  I have seen such a positive energy from this group.  I would like to start a book newbie discussion about some of the issues that I have been having trying to write my FIRST science fiction short story? Novella? whatever?  I would appreciate not only feedback but info on how you had a writing issue and what you did to work it out.  I would like to start by saying I have been having issues with 1st, 2nd or 3rd voice; or, who is telling the story.  I have finally worked out the kinks on another short story that I'm working on by imagining that I'm telling a story to my friend.  That is been very helpful in keeping the voice consistent. Peace. Gayle