system-pg-05-final

A quick story I wrote and threw together with some clip-art, I didn't draw any of this.I'd like feedback though on grammar and typos or any of the content of the story. I figured considering what's going on out there in the world that I would throw something like this out there as practice before I started on my sci-fi/fantasy stuff, please enjoy and thanks.
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