This is set in a fictional world where humans and dinosaurs coexist. The humans aren't based on any particular real-world culture, but they are black people with golden yellow eyes.
Also, "fleshslicers" are meat-eating dinosaurs similar to Allosaurus
Read more…But I wanted to let some people read it first. I wrote it at work the other day. I'm not TOO attached to it (yet), but I see it has some potential. Let me know what you guys think. Any criticism is helpful.
I've attached the story to this thread as w
Read more…If I ever going to get published, I need to get some courage. (Which I lack in greatly!) So, what better way grow it, by just throwing it among friends? Here is my latest work. It's a short short. I've done everything I could to make it my best. Plea
Read more…This is a scene from a novel I'm writing called Task Force Arrow. The commander of the warship Far Walker, Demmend Greggory is in his quarters when the alarm sounds. Intruders have gained entry into his ship...
Greggory’s blood ran cold at the
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After the Rasling Edotali entered the room in a newly rebuilt manse, the air inside of it tensed with the crackling energy of expected action. It seemed to burn through the tangible
mists of anxiousness and of fear.
a very short non-fiction story based on a small event in my life. I lay this on the forge to be vaporized,purified and eventually condensed."Phone call from Winter"Fall would soon be knocking at our front door, but its winds had already come around t
Read more…THE MOUNTAIRY ROCK CITY CHRONICLES:
THE SERPENT CULT
“… yes…” Max answered, and then woke up confused. His house phone blared suddenly. The sleep had been a deep one, filled with
THE MOUNTAIRY ROCK CITY CHRONICLES:
THE SERPENT CULT
Chapter one:
NEW YEARS IN MOUNTAIRY ROCK
"Happy NEW YEAR!!!" The raucous refrain bellowing from his car radio was followed by the distant sound of firecrackers echo
Hi. I am attaching a .PDF file of my flash fiction piece "Becoming Historic." Please critique and tell me what you think of it. Thanks in advance.
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One good turn deserves another... Laying a bit of my literary ego upon the altar anvil of The Forge. Let the hammers fly:
Msizi clutched the leather straps, holding on for life as the great umkhombe thundered across the plain. Its powerful hooves bro
Read more…So here are the first 1600 words of my short story "Shattering the Spear." I've posted it as a PDF doc to make it easier to read. Need to know if as a short story there's enough character development so far; if it flows; if it seems realistic; if as
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The young girl ran on tiptoe across the recently swept courtyard
of the two story inn and tavern, the largest building overall in the entire
nearby area consisting of farms and small villages. It sat not far from a major
crossro
Read more…THE RETURN
PRIME
“The time is nigh” the old man bellowed. “They are RETURNING!”
The aerie was filled with people that windless night. The platform rose higher than any other man made structure in Hai and looked down on t
